then
She clasps an empty plastic bag in her small hand, surveying
the trees with a critical eye. Delicately,
she parts leaves and touches ripe apples, settling on the perfect specimen, red
brushed with hints of gold.
“I think this one!” she yells, though I am right next to
her. Only now beginning to understand
the distinction between inside and outside voices, she is thrilled to be
outside, flexing her vocal chords amongst the neat lines of apple trees.
Snuggled against my chest in his carrier, Dylan looks around
at the sound of her voice, content to be carried in the sunshine.
“It looks perfect,” I agree, waiting for her to plop the
perfect apple into her bag.
She plucks it from the tree, turning it around in her hands.
Instead of putting it safely inside the bag, she raises it
to her mouth, nibbling a bit before tossing it onto the ground.
“No, that’s not it,” she declares, leaving the apple to be
pressed into cider. Handing me the bag,
she moves on to her next find.
Choosing six apples may take longer expected.
Around us, kids fall into two categories: speed pickers and
taste testers, tripping on apples brought down by gravity and thrown down by
hands finding flaws in the golden red skin.
Two or three more apples fail her quality inspection before
she turns to me, beaming.
“Moooommmmmy,” she breathes, “It’s perfect!”
The apple she hands me is slightly small and bruised on one
side, near the stem.
Her eyes meet mine, expectantly, so proud of the apple she’s
finally chosen.
My lips graze Dylan’s forehead; I briefly rest my palm on
her head, her hair warmed by the sun.
I gently place her apple in our bag.
“You’re right, Abs.
It’s perfect.”
now
the prompt:
autumn...
Delicious autumn! My very soul is wedded to it,
and if I were a bird I would fly about the earth seeking the successive
autumns. ~George Eliot
and if I were a bird I would fly about the earth seeking the successive
autumns. ~George Eliot
And that's how it's done, folks. One snapshot, so perfectly rendering your patience and tenderness, and her pure wonder.
ReplyDeleteLove that red tractor. If that doesn't say fall. Looks like a great outing.
ReplyDeleteAaaaaw! What a wonderful story and a great image of what really constitutes a perfect day.... or a perfect apple. Great ending, thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI love a child's view of perfection. It is much less jaded than ours. Perfect outside does not make perfect inside.
ReplyDeleteAwww...how sweet is this! I admire your patience. I think I'd be all "PICK AN APPLE ALREADY!"
ReplyDeleteLove it. The whole scene sounds perfect.
ReplyDeleteWell, that was last year :) This year, I'll be chasing Dylan around instead of keeping him contained!
ReplyDeleteHa! Patience! I guess I can bring it at times. Just not all the time :)
ReplyDeleteYes, they see things we don't and appreciate so much more. It's humbling hanging out with them.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading :) I still don't know what sort of criteria she used to decide. I think she chose about three of the apples in 30 minutes, and I chose the other three in two minutes!
ReplyDeleteThat's our favorite cider mill/orchard. If you want to sit on the tractor, you definitely have to go during the week!
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks Nancy! I guess in small snapshots, I have patience. Too bad it can't extend all day!
ReplyDeleteI love her definition of perfect! What a sweet memory you have of your little apple picker :)
ReplyDeleteAbbey is so smart isn't she???
ReplyDeleteI felt every single moment of this with you, from the kiss on his forehead to the touch of her warm hair. *sigh* thank you for letting me be there with you. xoxoxo
That sounds like the perfect day! And I love how she was so picky in her search for the perfect apple (because I'm super picky about apples too, lol). I love the pictures of your kids on the tractor.
ReplyDeletebeautiful! i'm sure the apples were indeed perfect!
ReplyDeleteI giggled out loud at, "Choosing six apples may take longer than expected." (One typo there....it's missing the word 'than'. But, clearly, since it made me laugh and think of my own kidlets, I knew exactly what you meant. :>) And I could really relate to the bit on volume control. That's something I work on with my own kidlets, who are older. And now that I'm volunteering in my daughter's kinder class, I find myself constantly reminding kids that it's not necessary to yell when they are saying something to the person right next to them. You completely pulled me in and I enjoyed this! :>
ReplyDeleteNow I want to go apple picking in the sun. I loved this, I felt like you were talking to me.
ReplyDeleteMay she always find things with imperfections perfect....
ReplyDeleteSuch care in finding the perfect apple! :)
ReplyDeleteShe can be so particular about certain things :) When it suits her, of course.
ReplyDeleteYes, I hope so. We're working on finding beauty in everything.
ReplyDeleteThank you! That's a great compliment. We actually haven't gone yet this year. It will be quite different with Mr. Mobile trolling the orchard!
ReplyDeleteOoops, thanks for catching. I cut some stuff out of that section and obviously over-slashed!
ReplyDeleteYes, I don't understand the volume thing. It's funny. Except when it results in a headache ;)
Perfectly imperfect, which just fine :)
ReplyDeleteYour perfect apple may be different than hers. I am not quite sure what she was searching for, but she found it a few times :)
ReplyDeleteOne day, let's pick apples together, ok? xoxo
ReplyDeleteShe's pretty amazing :) But I'm a little biased.
ReplyDeleteApples and picking, care and growth. Yes, that. Lovely, friend. Truly.
ReplyDeleteThe picking of fruit- be it apples, strawberries, or cherries- half of the fun is taste testing!
ReplyDeleteThis is just it.
ReplyDeleteAnd the choosing of apples nearly brings my poor child to tears, he takes it so seriously.
Seeing perfection in the imperfections. So lovely.
ReplyDeleteIt is perfect! I love those days. And I have a taste tester too. Aren't they wonderful?
ReplyDeleteExcept bananas! I always have to do cartwheels in the grocery store to keep them distracted until the bananas are weighed :) LOL
ReplyDeleteShe wanted something specific, that's for sure. Hopefully she always finds beauty amongst flaws :)
ReplyDeleteOh Felix! He and Abbey can never shop for produce together ;)
ReplyDeleteThere's something about fruit you pick yourself that is just a little bit better :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Galit! If I would truly soak in every moment, I can't imagine what I would learn from my kids.
ReplyDeleteThis post just made me want to go pick apples. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI SO wish we had a place to go apple picking around here but we're just not in the right spot. ;) Love this sweet moment with your girl.
ReplyDeleteSuch loveliness.
ReplyDeleteThen. And now.
AND George Eliot?
Yes. It's perfect.
I think we'll go back next week if we can muster up any sunshine around here. Writing this made me curious about how she'll be this year!
ReplyDeleteWell, when you fly up for your soup, we'll do this, too :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Alison :)
ReplyDelete'She yells, though I am right next to her' -- oh, I know that feeling! and what a great image 'flexing her vocal chords amongst the neat lines...' And the two types of kid pickers... yup! Sounds like you had a good day. Is the pie ready yet? ;)
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweetie, your Abby! Beauty is truly in the eye of the beholder. If she could deem an imperfection as perfect, even better for her! That's a life lesson that even many adults have a hard time grasping ;)
ReplyDeleteShe's funny, because the more tired she gets, the louder she gets, like she's trying to wake herself up!
ReplyDeleteI hope she can always find that beauty and appreciation for the things around her :) It's strange how they are so much wiser than we are sometimes.
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