Greta slid out of bed with a smile, stretching her arms overhead
and sweeping them down to her toes.
Sunlight streamed through a rather small window in her room; she pulled the curtains open before going to bed each night, loving the way the natural light coaxed her into alertness as fresh coffee beckoned her to the kitchen.
Sunlight streamed through a rather small window in her room; she pulled the curtains open before going to bed each night, loving the way the natural light coaxed her into alertness as fresh coffee beckoned her to the kitchen.
Especially on Saturdays. On Saturdays she did her long runs.
Running soothed her.
The routine way her legs carried her slowly on the short
route to the storefront, the few blocks a perfect warm-up for the run, the
solitary time allowing her time with her thoughts before running alongside
other members of the group.
The way the same path through the neighborhood could be
different each time, weather, her mood, background music all changing and
adding a new dimension to the familiar buildings and cracks in the sidewalk.
The way she could ease in and out of her own thoughts, her
music low in her ears so she could carry on breathless conversations with her
running partners.
They had been strangers before she had laced up
her brand new shoes to tentatively run with them. Quickly, they became friendly acquaintances.
Some slid effortlessly into the friend category, friendships formed in
the easy silence of their runs and the chatty confidences shared over sweaty
cups of coffee or walks home.
Padding into the kitchen, she poured the small, single cup of coffee she had before her morning runs, adding a dash of flavored creamer and artificial sweetener, vowing yet again to give up the little rectangle of chemical sweetness. Tomorrow.
Greta leaned slightly into the steam coming from her mug,
curling her hands around the ceramic warmth.
Her ears acknowledged a sudden silence.
The steady stream of the shower fit so seamlessly into her
consciousness that she had barely noticed it until it stopped.
Deliberately, she pulled another mug out of the cupboard,
eyes happily resting on the worn pair of running shoes near the front door,
dwarfing hers in size but mixed together comfortably with the other shoes lingering
on the tiled entry.
Today she wouldn’t be running her warm-up alone.
If you haven't met Greta yet and would like to know more about her, you can read more at Greta's Story.
the prompt:
This week, with Labor Day and the end of summer rapidly approaching, we asked you to write about a season of change for your character or you. It can be literal or metaphorical.
Hmmm.... I'm interested to see who her new friend is!
ReplyDeleteOooooooh I really liked this, it felt like an early morning , relaxed, easy, stretching...and the shoes next to hers...he's moved in. Yea! I'm ready for "her changes" :)
ReplyDeleteAhhh, two of my loves...running and coffee :)
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Ahh, running! LOVE running!
ReplyDeleteohh... worn running shoes is a good sign!
ReplyDeleteYay! Love that knowing smile, worn shoes, and extra mug!
ReplyDelete*Steamy*
{Sorry I couldn't resist!}
Go Greta!!
XO
Go Greta! So many changes here, from how the changes developed to little changes she hoped to make in her future. You perfectly weaved the prompt throughout this piece of Greta! :>
ReplyDeleteI'm totally intrigued! I love the build up of the story!
ReplyDeleteIt's a tiny detail, but it let me identify with Greta, so I loved it: I too use those "rectangles" in my coffee, and I've been swearing to give them up "tomorrow" for years.
ReplyDeleteI admire how you're able to show so much through this narrative. Without dialogue or unnecessary clutter--just pitch-perfect description of a character and her interior musings. And what an ending! Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nancy, although part of it is that I struggle with dialogue. It's tough for me, and I feel like it eats away at my word limit!
ReplyDeleteI use them, too. I haven't tried to give them up yet. (Though I should. Sigh. Along with a billion other things.)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks Karen! So much of her story is about change that it wasn't hard to find a moment to focus on for her :)
ReplyDeleteYay! a silly pun. Those make me happy :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely. Especially worn, male running shoes, all curled up with hers!
ReplyDeleteMe too! There's not too much of myself in Greta, but the running is similar :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! I have been slacking on my running a little, but writing about it counts, right? (kidding)
ReplyDeleteMaybe not quite moved in. I'm thinking more like the first overnight at her place...
ReplyDeleteYou'll see more, don't worry!
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